Sunday, June 3, 2012

Deciphered

Her tests were long
and her riddles were cruel. 
He smiled and he bore it
like a carefree fool. 
But alone, he wept,
heart's river set free,
bursting out of its bounds --
mind tossed at sea.
She marked his work "F"
when it deserved a "B." 
She bestowed an "A"
when it called for a "C." 
She made no sense,
and he gave no sign
of love's fire burning
past reason or rhyme . . . 
while she gamely walked
a very fine line,
love twisting 'round
her heart like a vine. 
Into his eyes
she refused to look;
a declaration of love
his fear would not brook. 
'Round and 'round each spun
the other, insane
with love incognito,
consuming flame. 
Then, one fine day,
the spinning stopped: 
Into his arms,
mad schoolmistress dropped. 
He embraced her and asked,
"What 'grade' will this be?" 
She replied, looking stern,
"An 'F' or a 'D.'" 
With that, he knew
love had won the day --
and never again
did she give him an "A."

2 comments:

Accidentalwriter said...

This is really great. Probably not the most sophisticated critique you've ever received - but truly heartfelt.

Turquoise said...

Don't worry -- there is no requirement for sophistication here, and sincerity is always a beautiful thing.

Thank you!

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